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Download the PDF: Brother Laurence of the Chizoba Sect


Long before being known as Brother Laurence, the man currently a pillar of the community, he was known by his birth name, Kayin Erslad. Kayin’s mother, Dina, stayed at home most of her life caring for her five children. Kayin’s father, Laurence, was a quiet man who performed what labor he could to provide for his growing family. Kayin’s childhood was uneventful and quite normal in a small farming community. He was provided basic education and started to work in the surrounding fields as a teenager.

Around this time, a plague ravaged the countryside. The unknown source of the plague left the people of the region defenseless, and the majority of Kayin’s town was felled by illness. Kayin’s mother was the first of his family to be taken by the plague. He watched his father care for her broken body in the days leading up to her death. In the following months Kayin’s siblings departed the mortal world one-by-one. Finally, his father was struck with sickness and it was clear Kayin would soon be alone in the world.

Kayin was sitting by his father’s side during the moment of his death. Before passing on, Laurence spoke to Kayin in a weak voice, “Son, leave this place and never look back. Remember us, but you were spared for a reason. The gods must have wondrous things in store for you.” The deaths of family left Kayin a teenage orphan; not knowing what to do or where to go, he drifted throughout the kingdom surviving. Inheriting great strength from his father, he earned a meager income by performing odd jobs and challenging manual labor over the span of several years into young adulthood. He roamed the kingdom lost for approximately 15 years. It is rumored that he engaged in unsavory mercenary activities, but no proof of those actions remains on record. He does not freely speak of this time in his life, and only his first mentor knows these facts from his past.

During a cold and rainy evening, Kayin sought shelter in a local temple. Penniless, fatigued, sick and severely malnourished, Kayin’s spirits were never lower; he passed out in a pew inside the temple and was found the next morning by Abbott Ciro. Kayin was administered care and provided with hot meals throughout the next week as he was nursed back to health. Kayin was disoriented in those first days, but Abbott Ciro spoke with him when he was finally coherent.

“Son, you’ve been through so much. The gods have guided you to us. They must have wondrous things in store for you.” Even in his stupor, the words dropped like an anvil inside Kayin’s heart. They were the same words his father spoke to him the night he died. Tears rolled down Kayin’s face as he wept, lamenting the loss of his family and his directionless life. Abbott Ciro provided a listening ear, “You want a different life. We can help you find one. I offer this opportunity to you, which you can refuse without punishment.” Kayin was ready to start the next chapter of his life, and accepted Ciro’s offer to be educated at the temple.

Kayin took his father’s name, Laurence, and immersed himself in his studies. He excelled in his training to become a Cleric. His strength and compassion forged by his personal tragedy made him a natural warrior-healer. Abbott Ciro honed Laurence’s skill and guided him through his personal anguish. Laurence completed his training and became a member of the famed Chizoba Sect, a religious-military order that provides spiritual guidance, law enforcement and protection in the kingdom.

Laurence relished the opportunity to perform good works across the kingdom. He quickly made a name for himself in a variety of skirmishes. But it was not until the Battle of Fayden Hill where he found greatness. A powerful necromancer, Vilmer the Dark, terrorized the area with a growing horde of undead creatures. The Chizoba Sect responded to the crisis and sought out Vilmer’s lair. The order dispatched on the mission was quickly overrun by the sheer number of undead creatures, but Brother Laurence charged through the masses of undead warriors and delivered a killing blow to Vilmer the Dark. As Vilmer fell, so did his warriors, but Laurence bears a massive scar down the right side of his face from the conflict.

After the Battle of Fayden Hill, Laurence was honored in the Chizoba Sect and granted the title of Brother, which he hold proudly to this day. Over the years, he has elevated his status within the organization and is the leader of the Chizoba Sect in the seaside town of Poormina, a bustling community in constant need of both spiritual guidance and law enforcement.

Current Lifestyle

Brother Laurence resides in the seaside town of Poormina, and can routinely be found attending to patrons in the Temple of Dawn, a place of worship. He continues to serve the Chizoba Sect as a mentor to young members and other adventurers. He pledges allegiance to the gods and works to shine their light throughout the town of Poormina and the greater kingdom on a daily basis.

He no longer participates in military missions for the Chizoba Sect, having retired from active service years ago.  He lives in a modest room in the back of the Temple of Dawn. He has a rich history of relationships with a wide variety of characters in town, including more unsavory elements. Many of these relationships were built up during his days as a battle cleric and enforcing the kingdom’s policies in the growing town of Poormina.

He travels to the capital city once or twice each year for an audience with the leader of the Chizoba Sect for the kingdom, High Priest Adamar. Brother Laurence often has to defend Adamar and the policies of the Chizoba as they have been called into question in recent years. Many in the kingdom see the religious-military organization as unnecessary and their tactics imposing. Growing resentful of the Chizoba Sect is making the daily operations in the Temple of Dawn more difficult for Brother Laurence. His kindness and devotion to the residents of Poormina have spared him from any ugly incidents, which have been reported elsewhere in the kingdom against members of the Chizoba Sect.


Brother Laurence is a 6’1” Human male. He remains well-built and athletic even for his age of 58. He is mostly bald and typically found in his red, yellow and white Chizoba Sect robes. His most prominent feature is the scar that runs down the right side of his face. The scar starts above his eye and slashes down the side of his face. The scar gives Brother Laurence a grizzled look, and his hawkish eyes can instill a sense of power if he is irritated and glares in someone’s direction. However, the grizzled exterior is usually softened by his gentle disposition and patient personality. His voice drips with the experience of a man that has seen many a dark day and lived to talk about it.


Brother Laurence is primarily focused on caring for the citizens of Poormina and the patrons in the Temple of Dawn. He continues to educate new members of the Chizoba Sect and mentor them along their own quests. His patience and openness can at times be his undoing, as he gives everyone – even the most unworthy – an opportunity or two to fail him. However, his compassion and empathy have gained him a countless number of allies inside Poormina and across the kingdom. Some of his most trusted allies are those that would be considered criminals by most people; there are rogues and other scoundrels that will drop their current activities in a second to respond to Brother Laurence’s call for assistance.

His loyalty and understanding makes his criticism sharp and powerful. Brother Laurence rarely raises his voice, but his tone takes on such a serious edge of disappointment when he is displeased that it cuts deeper than any outburst of yelling could match. He ignores many of the political issues that surround his position within the Chizoba Sect, dealing with High Priest Adamar only when required. He is personally conflicted about the role of the Chizoba Sect in government, but keeps these thoughts to himself as he does not wish to clutter the minds of the patrons in the Temple of Dawn or his young students. He believes that he owes his life to Abbott Ciro and the Chizoba Sect, and he will protect the institution even though he has private misgivings.

Application to Campaign World

Brother Laurence and the Chizoba Sect can be applied in multiple ways to a campaign setting. First, Brother Laurence can function as a hub for a wide variety of missions for the player characters. His veteran status of previous conflicts means he holds valuable knowledge of enemies and dangerous territories in the kingdom. When starting a new campaign, Brother Laurence can serve as the primary mentor for one or more player characters in the campaign world if they have a religious or divine background. He could also serve as an interesting mentor to a player character such a thief or rogue by trying to teach the character to change his or her way; or use that player character’s skills for a greater good. If the party develops a fondness for Brother Laurence, then he could later be placed in some danger where the party needs to act to in order to rescue him.

Second, the Chizoba Sect could be used as a constant backdrop in a campaign world. The political ramifications of a religious-military organization having such a close audience with the leader of the kingdom can unfold in many interesting directions for player characters to work through during a campaign. The Chizoba Sect is a highly structured and organized religious order spread throughout the kingdom. Each town features numerous Chizoba meeting halls and churches with extensive rituals and doctrine. Crimes are not only seen as a violation of law but also a violation of the gods, and punishments are swift and severe. The moral authority wielded by the Chizoba permeates all corners of the kingdom and assists to retain order as the population explodes.

For example, one possible thread through the campaign is increasing dissent toward the Chizoba Sect:

A cultural revolution is threatening to shatter the power of the Chizoba Sect in the kingdom. Every day, more people question the methods of the order while the growth of science and innovation has changed beliefs that were previously considered dogma. Whispers have filled the air most recently regarding the Chizoba’s response to this challenge. Leaders in art, science and other disciplines have departed the kingdom. Whether they are fleeing persecution or being silenced by an arm of the Chizoba is unknown. Members of the Chizoba have become fragmented themselves between those that hold fast to the traditional doctrine and those that are more willing to accommodate the changing times.

Final Notes

The art for Brother Laurence was a commission completed by Grant Gould, a licensed artist for Lucasfilm, Topps and other companies. I informed him of the character’s background and said, “Basically, can you give me a more badass version of Pete Postlethwaite from Romeo + Juliet?” He delivered in spades, and completely captured the look for Brother Laurence.

Last, please visit my site, The Id DM, and read the article about how to use NPCs to build the campaign world for players for more thoughts on how to utilize characters (like Brother Laurence) to bring life and flavor to your campaign.

Download the PDF: Brother Laurence of the Chizoba Sect

The Id DM

The Id DM is a psychologist during the weekdays. He DMs for a group of fairly loyal and responsible PCs every other Friday night. In the approximate 330 hours between sessions, he is likely anxious about how to ensure the next game he runs doesn't suck. You can check out his gaming website here, and also follow him on Twitter.

  9 Responses to “Brother Laurence of the Chizoba Sect – Steal this Major NPC (download)”

  1. Thank you to Stuffer Shack for giving me the opportunity to contribute to the site! I think Brother Laurence can be incorporated into any campaign, and the Chizoba Sect could function as a background organization or be a major component of your gaming world.

    To my players, shame on your for not avoiding spoilers about Brother Laurence’s story! 😉

  2. I think he’s a fantastic NPC, and very useful! Very good stuff, Id.

  3. Also, I like the download options (PDF).

  4. James,

    Thank you for the feedback. I hope the NPC is useful for you. I agree that the PDF is a good idea.

  5. I love thinking about ideas like this, but have trouble putting them on paper. Thanks for this great example. I think he is cool. Would like to know a little more of the sect.

  6. Very well thought out, and usable NPC. I wish I got around to writing so much about my NPCs down! I feel like there’s more to the story about him and Adamar.

  7. Brian, I based Adamar on the character of the same name from A Knight’s Tale. He’s not quite as nefarious as that character, but he’s . . . complicated. 🙂

    Alton, the Chizoba Sect can be taken in many directions in terms of history. Let me know if you have specific questions. You should check out this article on using religion/government in your campaign:

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